I was barely 8 when i saw her.She was all dressed up in the latest trends of that season.I am thankful to my maa for uniting us.I marvelled at her color,her curvaceous body which seemed to fit into my hands as if she were not a discrete entity,rather my extension.
Though Maa introduced her to me, she got rather touchy about my growing involvement with my Sweet Heart.What Maa thought would be a casual friendship,a few hours of fun and frolic, turned into something beyond the sense of space and time.Our Relationship transcended reality.We spent hours on end ,together,sometimes snuggled together in bed, sometimes sitting on the bench beneath the gulmohar tree in my school.Sharing laughs and anguish,victories and defeats.Revelling in our common dreams , visiting far off planets,making new friends,flying through space..
It was brilliant.But I guess Fate had other plans ....We were separated.. It was the worst feeling i had ever experienced in my life.. Her disease won.. She lost.. We lost....
I tried to send her to her place of birth,Japan, with hope and tears in my eyes..That was the last i saw of her..
All i got was a regret letter and a final Photograph of her... Some Entities give you calmness and happiness even after their death... She was a perfect example..
I still Dream of her.. She left me but not her Spirit... I loved her and will continue doing so..
Forever and ever..
My love.. My first Hand Held Video Game.......... ;)
October 19, 2008 at 1:40 PM
October 19, 2008 at 1:42 PM
Koshish to achchhi thi vaise... typical writers ki tarah suspense bana k ... par badhiya tha overall..
good goin..
October 19, 2008 at 9:26 PM
hey nice job buddy:)
--Akshat.:)
October 19, 2008 at 10:40 PM
October 19, 2008 at 10:41 PM
Nice work man.. would like to read more from you.
October 22, 2008 at 7:42 AM
i was shocked till i read ur last line...huh.......;)
October 22, 2008 at 7:51 AM
i waz expecting something like this....
October 22, 2008 at 10:34 AM
u know everythin abt me prateek...
ur expectation was inevitable :)
October 30, 2008 at 9:21 AM
man !!!
that was close, kaash woh 8 nahi 18 hota, aur woh wahi hoti jiske baare tumne likhte time socha hoga, aur maine padhte time
"her curvaceous body which seemed to fit into my hands as if she were not a discrete entity,rather my extension"
ooohhh sounds so exotic